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A note about jargon email template

A commitment to plainer writing after reader feedback.

Illustrative example. Replace the fictional sender, dates, amounts, locations, and account details before use.

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A note about jargonIllustrative preview
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Message anatomy

A useful starting point, with the important parts named.

A reader listed eleven words I use regularly and have never explained. All eleven now carry a definition on first use in every piece.

What you can change

  • Brand name
  • Subject line
  • Preheader
  • Eyebrow
  • Headline
  • Supporting copy
  • Primary action label
  • Primary action URL

What to keep clear

  1. Campaign context
  2. Headline and editorial premise
  3. Three skimmable sections
  4. Primary and secondary action
  5. Preference and unsubscribe footer

Complete starting copy

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Sample details are fictional. Replace them with reviewed customer and event data before use.
From
Seahouses Sheet
Subject
I have been using words nobody knows
Preheader
Eleven of them. All now explained on first use.

A change

Eleven terms used for four years without ever being defined

A reader listed eleven words I use regularly and have never explained. All eleven now carry a definition on first use in every piece.

The eleven

Mostly land tenure vocabulary: messuage, toft, croft, and eight others. All ordinary in the field and meaningless outside it.

What changes

A short definition on first use in each piece, and a glossary link. Not a footnote, because nobody reads footnotes.

What does not

The vocabulary itself. Replacing precise terms with vague ones would make the writing worse rather than clearer.

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If a word is unexplained anywhere, telling me is genuinely useful and takes one line.

Moosewave MCP

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Connected work

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AutomationsPlace this message inside a journey with a clear trigger and exit.AudiencesChoose who should receive it, and who should be left out.AnalyticsMeasure the response that matters after the send.MCP for agentsAdapt the structure through a compatible assistant with limited workspace access.